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The '''Story''' of [[Tomb Raider IV The Last Revelation]] is set completely in Egypt and around the events surrounding [[Lara Croft|Lara Croft's]] attempt to conceal [[Seth]] back to his tomb after accidentally releasing him, with only the exception of the training section in [[Cambodia]] where at the age of 16, Lara accompanies [[Werner von Croy]] in the search for the [[Iris]].

==Cambodia==
In 1984, [[Young Lara]] enters a tomb in [[Angkor Wat]] with von Croy. Von Croy's goal is to retrieve the Iris artefact. When they arrive the room where it's concealed inside a globe-like mechanism, which needs two people to open it. Lara hesitates to pull the other one of the levers, because she has read warnings from the inscriptions. The following dialogue takes place:
* Von Croy: Ahh, ancient hocus pocus... Forget this nonsense and come over here!
* Lara: I don't count poison darts and triggered entombment your average child's tea party. I feel we should lend this some respect...
* Von Croy: Haa... And you are the world-famous archaeologist-adventurer, Lara Croft, ja? No! No! I am the reknown archaeologist-adventurer, Werner von Croy! And you will do as I say! Go to the wall, and pull the lever!
* Lara: What was it you said? Disrespect is the route to carelessness?
* Von Croy: I am weary of this... Pull the lever now, Miss Croft!
* Lara: On your head be it, von Croy... [Lara starts to pull the lever.]

As they pull the levers, the globe opens, revealing the Iris on its pedestal. Werner approaches it, and as soons as he's about to grab it, the tomb starts to crumble. Lara runs towards the exit, but stops when Werner screams for help. His leg is trapped in the globe mechanism, and it's starting to close. Lara's going to go and help Werner, but the globe closes before she even gets to him. She has to save herself from the tomb, and she rushes out, avoiding closely getting crushed by falling rocks in the ceiling of the exit.

==King's Valley==
In 1999, Lara's travelling in Egypt. Riding a camel with her [[Guide|guide]] in the desert, they stop and dismount near a pile of rocks. She's about to pick up a glittering, tiny artifact, but the guide waves her to come over. Lara continues to pick up the artifact, but as she's about to grab it, a black scorpion crawls under a rock. Startled by the sight of it, Lara falls back, and a swarm of scorpions emerges out. She runs to her guide to see what he has found. It's a some sort of a monument, a bit shaped like a person laying on his back, with a pressure pad on its chest. Lara presses it and looks around: nothing seemed to happen. Suddenly, the ground starts to shake, small rocks are flying and both Lara and her guide fall into a chute. They end up into the [[Tomb of Seth]].

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 Banish the Lord of Darkness,<br />
 Seth.}}<br />
-Lara goes to see her old friend, [[Jean-Yves]], who tells her about what she has done and how the ceremony is complete with the [[Armour of Horus]]. Lara decides to go after the armour: "Time to put things right... And remove a thorn in my side in the process," she says to Jean-Yves and heads to the [[Temple of Karnak]]. If you have problems with finding a reliable [http://www.bestwritingservice.com/essay-service.html essay service] that offers assistance not only with creating essays but term and research paper writing as well, I highly recommend you to visit BestWritingService.Com.
+Lara goes to see her old friend, [[Jean-Yves]], who tells her about what she has done and how the ceremony is complete with the [[Armour of Horus]]. Lara decides to go after the armour: "Time to put things right... And remove a thorn in my side in the process," she says to Jean-Yves and heads to the [[Temple of Karnak]].
 ==Karnak==

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 Banish the Lord of Darkness,<br />
 Seth.}}<br />
-Lara goes to see her old friend, [[Jean-Yves]], who tells her about what she has done and how the ceremony is complete with the [[Armour of Horus]]. Lara decides to go after the armour: "Time to put things right... And remove a thorn in my side in the process," she says to Jean-Yves and heads to the [[Temple of Karnak]].
+Lara goes to see her old friend, [[Jean-Yves]], who tells her about what she has done and how the ceremony is complete with the [[Armour of Horus]]. Lara decides to go after the armour: "Time to put things right... And remove a thorn in my side in the process," she says to Jean-Yves and heads to the [[Temple of Karnak]]. If you have problems with finding a reliable [http://www.bestwritingservice.com/essay-service.html essay service] that offers assistance not only with creating essays but term and research paper writing as well, I highly recommend you to visit BestWritingService.Com.
 ==Karnak==

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 ==Cambodia (1984)==
 [[Young Lara]] enters a tomb in [[Angkor Wat]] with von Croy. Von Croy's goal is to retrieve the Iris artefact. When they arrive the room where it's concealed inside a globe-like mechanism, which needs two people to open it. Lara hesitates to pull the other one of the levers, because she has read warnings from the inscriptions. The following dialogue takes place:
 * Von Croy: Ahh, ancient hocus pocus... Forget this nonsense and come over here!
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 ==King's Valley (1999)==
-Lara's travelling in Egypt. Riding a camel with her [[Guide|guide]] in the desert, they stop and dismount near a pile of rocks. She's about to pick up a glittering, tiny artifact, but the guide waves her to come over. Lara continues to pick up the artifact, but as she's about to grab it, a black scorpion crawls under a rock. Startled by the sight of it, Lara falls back, and a swarm of scorpions emerges out. She runs to her guide to see what he has found. It's a some sort of a monument, a bit shaped like a person laying on his back, with a pressure pad on its chest. Lara presses it and looks around: nothing seemed to happen. Suddenly, the ground starts to shake, small rocks are flying and both Lara and her guide fall into a chute. They end up into the [[Tomb of Seth]].
+Lara's travelling in Egypt.[[File:Tr4 beginning FMV riding a camel.JPG|150px|thumb|left|]] [[File:Tr4 beginning FMV monument.JPG|150px|thumb|right|]] [[File:Tr4 beginning FMV fallen to the tomb.JPG|150px|thumb|right|]] Riding a camel with her [[Guide|guide]] in the desert, they stop and dismount near a pile of rocks. She's about to pick up a glittering, tiny artifact, but the guide waves her to come over. Lara continues to pick up the artifact, but as she's about to grab it, a black scorpion crawls under a rock. Startled by the sight of it, Lara falls back, and a swarm of scorpions emerges out. She runs to her guide to see what he has found. It's a some sort of a monument, a bit shaped like a person laying on his back, with a pressure pad on its chest. Lara presses it and looks around: nothing seemed to happen. Suddenly, the ground starts to shake, small rocks are flying and both Lara and her guide fall into a chute. They end up into the [[Tomb of Seth]].
 In the tomb's [[Burial Chambers]] Lara removes the [[Amulet of Horus]], not knowing that by doing so she releases Seth. There's a prophecy inscribed to the amulet: {{Quote||
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 Banish the Lord of Darkness,<br />
 Seth.}}<br />
-Lara goes to see her old friend, [[Jean-Yves]], who tells her about what she has done and how the ceremony is complete with the [[Armour of Horus]]. Lara decides to go after the armour: "Time to put things right. . . and remove a thorn in my side in the process," she says to Jean-Yves and heads to the [[Temple of Karnak]].
+Lara goes to see her old friend, [[Jean-Yves]], who tells her about what she has done and how the ceremony is complete with the [[Armour of Horus]]. Lara decides to go after the armour: "Time to put things right... And remove a thorn in my side in the process," she says to Jean-Yves and heads to the [[Temple of Karnak]].
 ==Karnak==
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 In order to reach the [[Temple of Horus]], Lara has to enter a few pyramids and do some digging by herself. In the temple, the final battle against Seth takes place. It's no use to fire him with guns, Seth must be re-entombed. Lara places the armour to its place with the Amulet of Horus onto a statue, which comes to life. Lara has to make her way to the top shaft in the temple. After succesfully doing so, she places the amulet to its place and seals the gate. Seth is now once again imprisoned.
-The passageway starts to collapse, and in a classic tomb raiding style, Lara must once again make her way out alive. Exhausted by all the running, just before the exit, Lara stops to catch her breath. Tiny rock are falling from the ceiling, and a shadow blocks the exit. It's von Croy again! Bigger rocks start to fall, time is running out.
+The passageway starts to collapse, and in a classic tomb raiding style, Lara must once again make her way out alive. Exhausted by all the running, just before the exit, Lara stops to catch her breath. Tiny rock are falling from the ceiling, and a shadow blocks the exit.[[File:Tr4 ending FMV werner 1.JPG|150px|thumb|right|]] It's von Croy again! Bigger rocks start to fall, time is running out.
 * Von Croy: Quickly girl! Before it collapses around you! [He leans forward, trying to grab Lara's hand.]
 [Lara evades falling rocks, falling a bit backwards]
 * Lara: You back, Werner? No more Seth?
 * Von Croy: No time! Your hand, Lara! Give me your hand!
 [The floor starts to collapse, Lara falls, but manages to grab a ledge in the doorway.]
 * Von Croy: Take my hand! I can pull you to safety!
 * Lara: Good to see you again, Werner.
 * Von Croy: I couldn't leave you!
 [The doorway collapses completely, von Croy goes away as quickly as he can to avoid being crushed by falling rocks. He looks behind, seeing the completely sealed doorway, takes off his hat and sighs.]
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 In order to reach the [[Temple of Horus]], Lara has to enter a few pyramids and do some digging by herself. In the temple, the final battle against Seth takes place. It's no use to fire him with guns, Seth must be re-entombed. Lara places the armour to its place with the Amulet of Horus onto a statue, which comes to life. Lara has to make her way to the top shaft in the temple. After succesfully doing so, she places the amulet to its place and seals the gate. Seth is now once again imprisoned.
-The passageway starts to collapse, and in a classic tomb raiding style, Lara must once again make her way out alive. Exhausted by all the running, just before the exit, Lara stops to catch her breath. Tiny rock are falling from the ceiling, and a shadow blocks the exit. It's von Croy again! Bigger rock start to fall, time is running out.
+The passageway starts to collapse, and in a classic tomb raiding style, Lara must once again make her way out alive. Exhausted by all the running, just before the exit, Lara stops to catch her breath. Tiny rock are falling from the ceiling, and a shadow blocks the exit. It's von Croy again! Bigger rocks start to fall, time is running out.
-* Von Croy: Quickly girl! Before it collapses around you!
+* Von Croy: Quickly girl! Before it collapses around you! [He leans forward, trying to grab Lara's hand.]
+[Lara evades falling rocks, falling a bit backwards]
-{{more}}
+* Lara: You back, Werner? No more Seth?
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 The '''Story''' of [[Tomb Raider IV The Last Revelation]] is set completely in Egypt and around the events surrounding [[Lara Croft|Lara Croft's]] attempt to conceal [[Seth]] back to his tomb after accidentally releasing him, with only the exception of the training section in [[Cambodia]] where at the age of 16, Lara accompanies [[Werner von Croy]] in the search for the [[Iris]].
-==Cambodia==
+==Cambodia (1984)==
-In 1984, [[Young Lara]] enters a tomb in [[Angkor Wat]] with von Croy. Von Croy's goal is to retrieve the Iris artefact. When they arrive the room where it's concealed inside a globe-like mechanism, which needs two people to open it. Lara hesitates to pull the other one of the levers, because she has read warnings from the inscriptions. The following dialogue takes place:
+[[Young Lara]] enters a tomb in [[Angkor Wat]] with von Croy. Von Croy's goal is to retrieve the Iris artefact. When they arrive the room where it's concealed inside a globe-like mechanism, which needs two people to open it. Lara hesitates to pull the other one of the levers, because she has read warnings from the inscriptions. The following dialogue takes place:
 * Von Croy: Ahh, ancient hocus pocus... Forget this nonsense and come over here!
 * Lara: I don't count poison darts and triggered entombment your average child's tea party. I feel we should lend this some respect...
@@ Line 12: / Line 12: @@
 As they pull the levers, the globe opens, revealing the Iris on its pedestal. Werner approaches it, and as soons as he's about to grab it, the tomb starts to crumble. Lara runs towards the exit, but stops when Werner screams for help. His leg is trapped in the globe mechanism, and it's starting to close. Lara's going to go and help Werner, but the globe closes before she even gets to him. She has to save herself from the tomb, and she rushes out, avoiding closely getting crushed by falling rocks in the ceiling of the exit.
-==King's Valley==
+==King's Valley (1999)==
-In 1999, Lara's travelling in Egypt. Riding a camel with her [[Guide|guide]] in the desert, they stop and dismount near a pile of rocks. She's about to pick up a glittering, tiny artifact, but the guide waves her to come over. Lara continues to pick up the artifact, but as she's about to grab it, a black scorpion crawls under a rock. Startled by the sight of it, Lara falls back, and a swarm of scorpions emerges out. She runs to her guide to see what he has found. It's a some sort of a monument, a bit shaped like a person laying on his back, with a pressure pad on its chest. Lara presses it and looks around: nothing seemed to happen. Suddenly, the ground starts to shake, small rocks are flying and both Lara and her guide fall into a chute. They end up into the [[Tomb of Seth]].
+Lara's travelling in Egypt. Riding a camel with her [[Guide|guide]] in the desert, they stop and dismount near a pile of rocks. She's about to pick up a glittering, tiny artifact, but the guide waves her to come over. Lara continues to pick up the artifact, but as she's about to grab it, a black scorpion crawls under a rock. Startled by the sight of it, Lara falls back, and a swarm of scorpions emerges out. She runs to her guide to see what he has found. It's a some sort of a monument, a bit shaped like a person laying on his back, with a pressure pad on its chest. Lara presses it and looks around: nothing seemed to happen. Suddenly, the ground starts to shake, small rocks are flying and both Lara and her guide fall into a chute. They end up into the [[Tomb of Seth]].
-{{more|Unfinished|--[[User:The Poet|The Poet]] 22:49, 25 June 2011 (CEST)}}
+In the tomb's [[Burial Chambers]] Lara removes the [[Amulet of Horus]], not knowing that by doing so she releases Seth. There's a prophecy inscribed to the amulet: {{Quote||
 [[Category:The Last Revelation]]