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The Poet: /* The Philosopher's Stone */ corrected a link

2012-06-15T13:21:41Z

‎The Philosopher's Stone: corrected a link

The Poet: /* The Iris */ corrected a link

2012-06-15T13:19:13Z

‎The Iris: corrected a link

The Poet: /* At Croft Manor Part 2 */ corrected a link

2012-06-15T13:16:51Z

‎At Croft Manor Part 2: corrected a link

The Poet: /* The Philosopher's Stone */ corrected links

2012-06-15T13:16:08Z

‎The Philosopher's Stone: corrected links

The Poet: adding details and more background to the scenes so that the text wouldn't look so much like a list of quotes

2012-06-12T18:48:29Z

adding details and more background to the scenes so that the text wouldn't look so much like a list of quotes

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The Poet: /* Memorial Service */ corrected a couple of minor typos

2012-06-12T12:36:59Z

‎Memorial Service: corrected a couple of minor typos

The Poet: /* The Iris */ Finished?

2011-06-25T17:16:44Z

‎The Iris: Finished?

The Poet: /* The Iris */ added more scenes and links, made a couple corrections.

2011-06-25T16:52:41Z

‎The Iris: added more scenes and links, made a couple corrections.

The Poet: added links and At Croft Manor Part 4

2011-06-25T15:15:10Z

added links and At Croft Manor Part 4

The Poet: /* The Bestiary */ completed (?)

2011-06-25T15:06:20Z

‎The Bestiary: completed (?)

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-As Lara has fought against the [[Stone Serpents]], she is finally able to place the remaining two [[God Stones]] to their places in the [[Philospher's Gate]]. When all of the stones are placed, the [[Philosopher's Gate]] reveals a cave. At the far end of it Lara sees a wall that has turned into gold around a red stone – the [[Philosopher's Stone]]. As she gets closer to it, the floor collapses underneath her and she slides further into the depths of the cave. <br/>
+As Lara has fought against the [[Stone Serpents]], she is finally able to place the remaining two [[God Stones]] to their places in the [[Philosopher's Gate]]. When all of the stones are placed, the [[Philosopher's Gate]] reveals a cave. At the far end of it Lara sees a wall that has turned into gold around a red stone – the [[Philosopher's Stone]]. As she gets closer to it, the floor collapses underneath her and she slides further into the depths of the cave. <br/>
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 The caves turn out to be [[The Colosseum]] and various enemies wait Lara there, like [[Lions]] and [[Gladiators]]. Lara finds two pieces of a [[Gemstone]] in the caves. After gathering the last piece of it Lara ends up falling along a chute. Eventually she ends up hanging on an edge of a deep pit. Then Pierre appears to stand above her, holding out his guns.<br />

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-[[Red alert!|Red Alert]] is set to the building, making Lara’s espace more difficult. She makes her way upper towards the roof as she tries to avoid getting killed by guards, [[Cyborgs]] and gunfire from the [[VCI Helicopter]].  Finally Lara emerges from the VCI building to a rooftop. Armed gunmen are chasing her, but Lara manages to jump to her hand-glider and glides off. Lara evades the bullets, and succesfully jumps off on the next roof. The gunmen don’t look so happy as they’ve failed in their mission to get rid of Miss Croft.<br />
+[[Red alert!|Red Alert]] is set to the building, making Lara’s espace more difficult. She makes her way upper towards the roof as she tries to avoid getting killed by guards, [[Cyborg|Cyborgs]] and gunfire from the [[VCI Helicopter]].  Finally Lara emerges from the VCI building to a rooftop. Armed gunmen are chasing her, but Lara manages to jump to her hand-glider and glides off. Lara evades the bullets, and succesfully jumps off on the next roof. The gunmen don’t look so happy as they’ve failed in their mission to get rid of Miss Croft.<br />
 ==At Croft Manor Part 5==

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 Lara examines the [[Philosopher's Stone]] in her hand. Then we're back at Croft Manor, where Winston, Charles Kane and Father Patrick continue reminiscing about Lara and her adventures.<br />
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-* Winston: [While placing the [[Philosopher’s Stone]] on the table] And so ended the first of many. I'm sure Miss Croft would be the first to apologize for her not entirely courteous behaviour regarding some of the more delicate religious artifacts. Father Patrick? <br />
+* Winston: [While placing the [[Philosopher's Stone]] on the table] And so ended the first of many. I'm sure Miss Croft would be the first to apologize for her not entirely courteous behaviour regarding some of the more delicate religious artifacts. Father Patrick? <br />
 * Father Patrick: No need, my friend. All in a good cause. At least we knew they were in secure hands. And fortunately the church was above sending a bullet-proof envoy to retrieve them.<br />
 * Charles Kane: Ahh, but she recognized her place in the great scheme. Some things, as history has illustrated, best left to their slumber...  <br />
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 ==The Spear of Destiny==
 It’s a dark, snowy night in [[Russia]]. Lara and Charles Kane have arrived to hill with [[Snowmobiles]] and are looking towards a harbour, Lara’s using a pair of binoculars. <br />

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-Lara visits a temple behind the area which has the [[Philosopher’s Gate]] and by solving a small puzzle she gains access to a little room where the [[Saturn Stone]] waits. As she returns from the temple to the [[Philosopher’s Gate]], Pierre comes around a corner. Lara points him with her pistols.<br />
+Lara visits a temple behind the area which has the [[Philosopher's Gate]] and by solving a small puzzle she gains access to a little room where the [[Saturn Stone]] waits. As she returns from the temple to the [[Philosopher's Gate]], Pierre comes around a corner. Lara points him with her pistols.<br />
 * Pierre: Come, come, Lara. We're all friends here.<br />
 Pierre snaps his fringers and makes a gesture as welcoming Lara to step forward. Larson’s hand appears next to Lara’s head, he’s aiming her with his [[Revolver]].<br />
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-At [[Trajan’s Markets]] Lara has to find the two remaining [[God Stones]]: [[Mars Stone]] and [[Venus Stone]]. While searching for them she encounters the [[Laser Head]] and a [[Bronze Statue]]. The former guards the [[Mars Stone]] and the latter guards the [[Venus Stone]]. After Lara has retrieved them she returns to the [[Philosopher's Gate]] via a pool at the side of the garden.<br />
+At [[Trajan's Markets]] Lara has to find the two remaining [[God Stones]]: [[Mars Stone]] and [[Venus Stone]]. While searching for them she encounters the [[Laser Head]] and a [[Bronze Statue]]. The former guards the [[Mars Stone]] and the latter guards the [[Venus Stone]]. After Lara has retrieved them she returns to the [[Philosopher's Gate]] via a pool at the side of the garden.<br />
 * Lara: [With her pistols ready, looking around] Come out, come out, where ever you are.<br />
 * Larson: [Coming out from behind a corner] Hey, this ambushin' ain't what it used to be.<br />
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 * Lara: Larson, behind you!<br />
 * Larson: I may be a dumb man, but I ain't falling for that again.<br />
-The [[Stone Seroents]] move even further away  from the wall, Lara is taking steps back, still aiming with her pistols.<br/>
+The [[Stone Serpents]] move even further away  from the wall, Lara is taking steps back, still aiming with her pistols.<br/>
 * Lara: No, really, behind you!<br />
 * Larson: [Making fun of Lara's warnings] Behind you, behind you.<br />
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-As Lara has fought against the [[Stone Serpents]], she is finally able to place the remaining two [[God Stones]] to their places in the [[Philospher’s Gate]]. When all of the stones are placed, the [[Philosopher’s Gate]] reveals a cave. At the far end of it Lara sees a wall that has turned into gold around a red stone – the [[Philosopher’s Stone]]. As she gets closer to it, the floor collapses underneath her and she slides further into the depths of the cave. <br/>
+As Lara has fought against the [[Stone Serpents]], she is finally able to place the remaining two [[God Stones]] to their places in the [[Philospher's Gate]]. When all of the stones are placed, the [[Philosopher's Gate]] reveals a cave. At the far end of it Lara sees a wall that has turned into gold around a red stone – the [[Philosopher's Stone]]. As she gets closer to it, the floor collapses underneath her and she slides further into the depths of the cave. <br/>
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 The caves turn out to be [[The Colosseum]] and various enemies wait Lara there, like [[Lions]] and [[Gladiators]]. Lara finds two pieces of a [[Gemstone]] in the caves. After gathering the last piece of it Lara ends up falling along a chute. Eventually she ends up hanging on an edge of a deep pit. Then Pierre appears to stand above her, holding out his guns.<br />
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 * Lara: Don't let me hold you up.<br />
 Lara then succesfully reaches the [[Philosopher's Stone]] after fighting against the [[Silver Statue]].
 ==At Croft Manor Part 2==

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 ==Memorial Service==
-In the pouring rain stands a statues of Lady Lara Croft, a plate at the foot of the statue reads ''LARA CROFT
+In the pouring rain stands a statue of Lady Lara Croft, a plate at the foot of the statue reads ''LARA CROFT
 ONCE AND FUTURE ADVENTURER, FOR HER.''.
-Winston gets into a limo, where Father Dunstan is awaiting him. They are taken back to Croft Manor. A news show is running in the background. ''In world news, a private memorial service was held today for renowned archaeologist Lara Croft.''<br />
+Winston gets into a limousine, where Father Dunstan is awaiting him. They are taken back to Croft Manor. A news show is running in the background. ''In world news, a private memorial service was held today for renowned archaeologist Lara Croft.''<br />
 * Father Patrick: 'Tis a sad day, Winston.<br />
 * Winston: She will live on forever in our hearts...<br />
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 * Winston: Indeed. We can only hope and pray that she may yet return to us. But I fear Von Croy digging in the hopes of discovering her alive may only be met with black reality.<br />
 * Father Patrick: Indeed. Indeed.<br />
 ==At Croft Manor Part 1==

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 * Guard: Only visual, sir!
 * Von Croy: No need. I know who the intruder is... Lara Croft.
-* Von Croy's associate: Aah, your past once more comes to haunt you, Werner, foolish boy. No matter, she will not escape. Place the building under full alert!
+* Von Croy's associate: Aah, your past once more comes to haunt you, Werner, foolish boy. No matter, she will not escape. Place the building under full alert!<br />
 {{more|unfinished|--[[User:Tombraidergirl|tombraidergirl]] 15:49, 17 March 2011 (CET)}}
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 ==The Iris==
-* Zip: Okay, Miss Croft, I'm presuming, by the lack of communication that you're at Industries building, right? Containing our little prize- the Iris?
+* Zip: Okay, Miss Croft, I'm presuming, by the lack of communication that you're in position. Facing the [[Von Croy Industries]] building, right? Containing our little prize - the Iris?
 [Lara talks through her headset.]
 * Lara: Affirmative.
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 * Zip: Geez, now that was a blast! What the hell happened?
 * Lara: Never mind Yankee, I'm going in.
+[Lara slides along a chute into the building's air ventilation shafts.]<br />
 * Zip: Ok, you've been a bad girl, and before I tell you what your punishment is, I just want to say that there's no point in arguing 'cause I ain't gonna be listenin'. Take all your metal items-- yes, guns is metal... and put 'em in the tray. Now!
 * Lara: So, you're telling me to disarm myself in a building crawling with armed guards?
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 * Zip: Alright, I'm listening again. And trust me, I ain't going to mess this up, okay?
 * Lara: Do I have a choice?
-* Zip: Nope.
+* Zip: Nope.<br />
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 * Zip: Lara are you there? Lara? Lara! You broke? You ain't dead, is ya? C'mon girl, answer me!
 * Lara: Gonna be sore in the morning...
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 * Zip: Bing! Ground floor: depart here for gun-toting refrigerator men and long walk back upstairs. Sorry girl, you got it, but hell, you in one piece, ain't ya?
 [Lara starts coughing]
-* Lara: Never felt better.
+* Lara: Never felt better.<br />
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-[Lara returns to the Philosopher's Gate via the pool at the side of the garden]<br />
+[Lara returns to the Philosopher's Gate via the pool at the side of the garden after retrieving [[Mars Symbol]] and [[Venus Symbol]].]<br />
 * Lara: [With her pistols ready, looking around] Come out, come out, where ever you are.<br />
 * Larson: [Coming out from behind a corner] Hey, this ambushin' ain't what it used to be.<br />
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 [Father Patrick and Charles Kane are looking outside to the rain through a window.]
-* Father Patrick: This night reminds me of the time out at Connussie.
+* Father Patrick: This night reminds me of the time out at [[Connussie]].
 * Charles Kane: Winston's home?
 * Father Patrick: Indeed, yes. The staff had taken leave due to flooding. Lara, back when she was a slip of a girl, was staying with Winston and his wife. It was her who contacted me as a matter of fact. Some trouble out on one of the islands: weird lights, manifestations as sort of things.
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 ==The Bestiary==
-[In Connusie, [[Young Lara]] is in her room, starting to change for bed but she stops when she hears the squeaking of the door as Father Patrick arrives to Winston's home.]
+[In Connussie, [[Young Lara]] is in her room, starting to change for bed but she stops when she hears the squeaking of the door as Father Patrick arrives to Winston's home.]
 * Father Patrick: Evening Winston. And how would I be able to help?
 [He and Winston sit together facing each other at a table]
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 * Father Patrick: And you have learned a few valuable lessons from that, I'd be thinkin'?
 * Lara: You'd be thinkin' right, Father.<br />
 ==The Iris==

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 * Hanged demon: Who? Hmm... for it is more like 'what'. Comdemned to wander between the kingdoms of man and that of the elementals. But I must be swift in my request... For they watch and wait to once more draw me back into the darkness.
 * Lara: Request?
-* Hanged demon: My heart, girl. They have hidden my petrified heart in the roots of this, the World Tree, down under the watchful gaze of the dragon Nidhogg. Find this, my child, and return it to its rightful resting place... And you shall be rewarded...
+* Hanged demon: My [[Demon's Heart|heart]], girl. They have hidden my petrified heart in the roots of this, the World Tree, down under the watchful gaze of the dragon Nidhogg. Find this, my child, and return it to its rightful resting place... And you shall be rewarded...
 * Lara: And why on Earth should I trust... you?
 * Hanged demon: Not on Earth, girl, in between... [laughs] My soul is gone and how it fares, nobody knows and nobody cares.
-[The demon disappears, his laughter echoes in the night.]
+[The demon disappears, his laughter echoes in the night.]<br />
 ==The Iris==